Dignity

I thought it flowed very well and beautifully. it started so strong and stayed strong throughout the poem and right to the very end. the first stanza is a brilliant start, telling the things this person can have. the second stanza is an amazing body, letting the reader know how this person is pretending but isn't really a wonderful person. the closing stanza is the perfect ending, telling the person what they cannot have. truly inspirational, and i really enjoyed it. my only suggestion is to think about using punctuation. it will help your flow and help the reader as well.

I like how you let "them" have stuff that didn't matter like a broken heart but you got to keep the soul i love the first stanza...and i like how you put Jesus in there! <333
Jesus IS and inspiration and my life
HIGH FIVE =]

5-5

I loved the first two stanzas, they were amazing, and powerful, with great structure and rhyme. I think my favorite stanza, was the first one. However, I didn't really like the last stanza, it got a bit muddled and wasn't as powerful. I also thought that the flow died in this stanza. Saying this, I did like the last line of that stanza, very philosophical, as is most of your work.

Brad

Not so long in verse, but long in it's lament of faith and individual beliefs. True, we each need to find our own. Great idea!

Waw,its nice poem and sad but i love the 1st stanza as you descipe how its going and he can take everything but not your soul,nice flow as well,keep writting,5/5