But I knew the rules in my head
So I ignored what was in my heart
Gave up on us so long before
We even had the chance to start

So sad. I really do like this though.. even though I'm not used to r/r/c-ing songs. Anway.. I really can't see anything that needs changing.. So hats off to you hun.. Great job.

Very well expressed , good choice of words , good flow , hope to see more soon