One day mother will love me

by she   Apr 30, 2008


I can feel the weight of your expectations on my back,
And with each strained step I realize how much beauty I lack.
I cut myself on a thorn, I'm bleeding, as my skin lies torn,
But yet I keep going,
Reaching, closer to your embrace,
When I wanna let go, and no longer climb, I tell myself
One day I'll be good enough,
One day mommy will love me
And that alone is enough to strengthen me,
I go through the tunnels without food,
And come out thinner,
I go through each dark cave,
Any cave my mother wants,
And I come out,
Ever so close to her embrace,
Ever so closer,
To her love

But will I ever get there, will I ever be enough

-not shure how to end it yet, please help,thnx

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    Kay, you know sumthing there was a time i felt like this, but i you know my mother has loved me all along...I like this poem. Can realte to this vary well.. 10/5 xD

  • 16 years ago

    by CareBear

    You know what, there was a time i felt like this but i realised my mother has loved me all along. I liked this though. Thankyou so much for your comment, i had to return the favour!
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    I think its great how it is..you got me to picture what you are saying. and its amazing how good your use of words are. good job sweets.

    love emmy

  • 16 years ago

    by tears in heaven

    My mother is abusive and in jail now. you feel you need something i feel i do like something is missing. we can strive to do our best and fill that emptiness..<3

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Perfect ending i have no mother, I was adopted into a wealthy family who threw me away when they had other children. point being,,,,,,,,make a family of yur own. close friends...like me superb

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