My mom hasn't told me she loved me in two days.....it's too much. i know. it's so hard, we're never going to live up to them. i'm sorry. i can't write your ending...only YOU know how this story ends, Monique...

I liedk the ending actually, maybe thats just me though, keep it up xxx

I love the ending as it is, and i feel your pain, i tried and tried to get my dad's attention and his love and i still cry some nights knowing he'll never love me, very emotional poem, i love it 5/5

Perfect ending i have no mother, I was adopted into a wealthy family who threw me away when they had other children. point being,,,,,,,,make a family of yur own. close friends...like me superb

My mother is abusive and in jail now. you feel you need something i feel i do like something is missing. we can strive to do our best and fill that emptiness..<3

I think its great how it is..you got me to picture what you are saying. and its amazing how good your use of words are. good job sweets.

love emmy

You know what, there was a time i felt like this but i realised my mother has loved me all along. I liked this though. Thankyou so much for your comment, i had to return the favour!
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Kay, you know sumthing there was a time i felt like this, but i you know my mother has loved me all along...I like this poem. Can realte to this vary well.. 10/5 xD