Eros Had One Arrow (part 3- poet view)

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Apr 30, 2008


Well she turns around and leaves this dream
Walks out the only door
Eros made it far to easy
He's too easy to not fall for

Trapped inside his own dream
Twisted to be real
Her eyes give her away to well
And he knows how she feels

He knows that your sorry
It hurts that you don't feel the same
Eros had one arrow left
Broken heart, he has good aim

He's not waking from this poem
This dream is all too true
Dearest, Eros had one arrow left
And he did not shoot you
~LackOfColour

Eros's reaction is swift and powerful: he shoots the poet with a love arrow.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Eros made it far to easy
    He's too easy to not fall for
    -agree with gabby,this is NOT true!
    very sad sad poem

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Shut up jesse. why would you write a poem that almost makes me cry?????

    Eros made it far to easy
    He's too easy to not fall for

    ^^ for one thing, that's a lie...if you're too easy not to fall for..so am i. and i don't want to be that, jesse, i don't. ((wrong "to" shud be "too"))

More Poems By Curing the Comon Cliche