Wow, this is intense. I really liked how you used death of like calling it like instead of using a girl or a guy has your "person" to kill upon you, you used death which was even more intense then i would've thought of.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Very powerful, well done keep it up xxx

Nicely written...
the emotions are well expressed...

"Come to me death , on my knees i faint
how i want to meet you , in your arm my saint
how they fear you my dear, they all runaway
they curse you and hate you , this they all say "

^^this stanza is very captivating... how people fear death...how they runaway from it...hate it... very well written...

"i can i beg you , come to me , i beg
i am on my knees , have mercy i am on my legs"

^^well...What I felt is repetition of beg doesnot add any impact... i found it a little off...

Overall.. a good read..

Wow ... That was captivating and heartfelt ! What a poem you've penned ! It's very well written. And I honestly don't know the amount of pain you must have been through to ask for death to be your way out.. The agony & longing for relief was shown in each word & every line 5/5

Emmmm
i don't like it very much
it's so so dark and sad
but heyy beleave me hell is more painful than you think it is in this poem
and Dont take life too seriously,Always find time to laugh... Remember that laughter not only adds years to ur life,But adds more Life to ur Years....