Comments : A Black soul

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    Its too nicley written , full of emotions , sadly spoken ! I really liked it so much

    My soul is black
    I never knew the light.
    How can I be good...
    When all I know is bad.
    How can I dream if I live a nightmare.
    Don't judge me,
    I'm already dead.

    5/5

    Cheers
    Biya

  • 16 years ago

    by ES Nvs

    Thanks for your comment Biya

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    It is a nice poem. keep up