Dream About Love

by Goodbye   Apr 30, 2008


Innocent dreaming
a smile on her face
Sweet dreams, darling
nobody will take your place
In the dreams she is alive
In the dreams she can live
because this reality killed her
dreams, but when she sleep
her dreams are still alive

And she hopes
and she loves
Her heart is full of light
in needs to be let out
And she calls
and she wants
him come back and
take her away

This all time she used is wasted
every single day the she thinks
will become only a piece of history
She is the one will be forgotten
lost in the piece of book unread

And every day she dreams that is night
She lives the days waiting for nights
She can not find him here so she has to go
and find him where ever he is

He is sleeping there too and waiting for her
only the dreams will find a path to connect her
And it is she that he loves, in his heart has written
"dedicated for her"

And they both know nobody will ever understand
what was this thing going on, (they will never know)
The truth is that everything fades, goes away when they wake up

But in the dreams they are happy together
and in the dreams they will forever stay

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Note: this poem might sound very messy one, but for some of you who understand, it is complitely understandable..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Salwa

    Noor-
    i totally, TOTALLY understand this. your imagination is astounding and your choice of words was perfect. it is like a book of a girls heart, spoken from her mind. they conflict, but still balance each other out.

    i am blessed to have the words come from you that i sometimes cannot express, and many things make sense to me.

    i thank you for that.

    bravo noor.....BRAVO.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    THIS POEM IS AMAZING. You're meaning, imagery, forceful thoughts, everything, just very good. You forgot some words though, that will help the flow, my best idea is to go back through and see if anything sounds weird, it's good to say it outloud. If you can't find where I'm talking about, contact me, but otherwise, I think that you did an awesome job on this, I wish there was a 6 on the meter...

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    No problem with the mess... Who wud not love dreams N after reading this sister Noorie... I too want to be in dreams n never wake...

    That was just a joke... Nice poem on drteams... It connects us to so many interesting n wonderful things... Only if some of them came true....

    Lovely pictured poem..

    Keep writing

    best wishes,

    karan