No problem with the mess... Who wud not love dreams N after reading this sister Noorie... I too want to be in dreams n never wake...

That was just a joke... Nice poem on drteams... It connects us to so many interesting n wonderful things... Only if some of them came true....

Lovely pictured poem..

Keep writing

best wishes,

karan

THIS POEM IS AMAZING. You're meaning, imagery, forceful thoughts, everything, just very good. You forgot some words though, that will help the flow, my best idea is to go back through and see if anything sounds weird, it's good to say it outloud. If you can't find where I'm talking about, contact me, but otherwise, I think that you did an awesome job on this, I wish there was a 6 on the meter...

Noor-
i totally, TOTALLY understand this. your imagination is astounding and your choice of words was perfect. it is like a book of a girls heart, spoken from her mind. they conflict, but still balance each other out.

i am blessed to have the words come from you that i sometimes cannot express, and many things make sense to me.

i thank you for that.

bravo noor.....BRAVO.