This one is classical in its tone and structure...like Keats Grecian urn..the last lines Play on... Play on..
Flute has been common with the Greeks..the reed or pipi as they call it, but our connotation of flute is with pure, serene love of Lord Krishna...the music is so enchanting that it sooths not only the sensual ear but our souls too as you ve mentioned in your poems...
sool soothing lyrics and composition.

I love flute n remember how a girl of 8 years from Bangalore played that stunned each n every soul present in a inauguration show of The famous free homeopathic doctor of poor... Doctor Narayan Savant of Hari Om Trust.....

U have choosen so many topics a very few even know existz n if foreign readers read this... tey would definitely like this...

I wud request a few of ma frens to read ur writes, may b tey will find somrthing worthwhile n of knowledge..

Sir... good work again...

Keep it up,

Best wishes,

karan

Your poem seems to me very old fashioned. very old fashioned style to write a poem. as i noticed your work doesn't look different. all the very same.