Good flow, well done for this poem its really good xxx

It looks like you spent awhile on this one, great job though i really enjoyed reading it.
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Wow...
I think I might cry.. ^.^
This was amazing, and emotional..
and just plain beautiful...
but sad, of course.

Keep it up...

Man i love it. it is so sad i i choked up reading it. love it. KM