You must have had a broken heart

WOW, WHAT A GREAT POEM, BUT I THINK THAT YOU THINK TWICE AGAIN AND TRY TO TRYST IN LOVE AGAIN, WHO KNOWS , YOU MAY GET MUSH BETTER

Itz hard to see anyone dying of heartbreak n we end up spectators doing little or nothing for such persons.....

N we all die of heartbreaks from broken friendships, untimely death of anyone closeest to us be it blood relation or not a blood relation... n sum relationships r not blood relationships but r more superior to blood relationships... n we all die of heartbreaks... n heartbreaks in like n love r more....

Hope we invent one common language where there will be no heartbreak deaths......

A person with a heartbreak is like aperson in coma... alive but long dead...

N well begun is half done... n wen we laugh a lot itz that we will have to cry.... itz always like that with every single life..... All things come in parts like seasons...

Nice one gIrL... C u mature with every write.. n one day u will b a gr8 writer...

All d best for ur future writes to come...

Karan

You should have waited till i post a poem lol.

this poem is great and i understand your feelings and same as Ash i liked the choice of words in these lines

"So I learn not to trust love anymore
& never give it the ability to trap me again
Because all it does is give me this sore
That would wrap my heart like a chain"

Excellent write. Simple but still able to convey your feelings. Every stanza was so perfect with the rhyming scheme working so well.

I am just a normal girl like everyone
Thinking that love is a big mystery
Once you fall in there is no way to run
And your heart will no longer be free

^^ It's a simple truth said but written down so well that when one thinks back it seems like a striking thought.

It was true; love is not an easy game
Love is something that raises you high
And sometimes it makes you fall in pain
Especially when it is all build upon a lie

^^Once again this is yet another well written piece - simple but still stating yet another fact of love...

So I learn not to trust love anymore
& never give it the ability to trap me again
Because all it does is give me this sore
That would wrap my heart like a chain

^^ I love the metaphor that you used here: "That would trap my heart like a chain". Just seemed so real at that instant and immediately added an image into my mind.

Then come a day when I decide to try
Because I found in him this warmness
But every now and then he sees me cry
And all he can do is to wonder and guess

^^ Should it not be: "Then came a day..."
But once again well structured thoughts and simple words flowing freely in this stanza.

So after he read that poem I shred
He understood how it always starts
Looking deep into my eyes he said
You must have had a broken heart

^^ A nice ending.