Breathless Endeavor of Emotions

by Miss Kay   Apr 30, 2008


Breathless Endeavor of Emotions
Dedicated to my dear love, Ryan Buckmaster

You are the poison that fills my veins
The one who will steal my last breath
In this speeding car, switching lanes
To get to you, like an addict to meth

To hold you and breathe you in
For a night of bad decisions and desire
More lustful than I have ever been
I'm a ticking bomb, begging you to cut the wrong wire

Listen to the ticking, the sound of my heart
It slows and speeds at the feel of your hands
As you caress my lips the world falls apart
With every breath of your scent my heart expands

Hold me closer, I will feel your pulse
To show how alive we are as your heart quickens
Close your eyes, learn to decide on impulse
As the blood in your body thickens

© Kayla Rogers, April 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Kay

    "The tasteless"
    Thank you for your comment however I must correct you and say that I feel as if you have misunderstood the first stanza of my poem.

    "You are the poison that fills my veins
    The one who will steal my last breath"

    By the last line I mean that he will be the one beside me as I die, as in, our last breath will be spent together. Perhaps that "steal" is the wrong word to use here which is something I didn't think about.

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    A very sensual and heartfelt write.True longing is expressed very well in this poem,sexy but classy! excellent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by ashley joy

    All I can say is that this is sweet,bitter,emo,sad,loving,dark and a fantastic work of art! I loved every word

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    OMG this is sooo good! i swear... yo u blew me away.. i'm not even kidding.. everythin rhyme and it's so cool how you describe ur feelings for him.. especially wen u said about the ticking bomb... i was like whoa...
    there's nothing negative about this.. no mistakes.. well written =]

  • 16 years ago

    by shivali

    To hold you and breathe you in
    For a night of bad decisions and desire
    More lustful than I have ever been
    I'm a ticking bomb, begging you to cut the wrong wire

    adorable

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