Never more

by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX   Apr 30, 2008


'Never more', said the man stood by the shore.

'Never more', said the man in the story.

'Never more', said the girl next door.

'Never more', they both said stood on the sea shore. ...

... and they were never heard from again, the town's people never heard, never more, ever again, amen.

The end

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  • 16 years ago

    by Scott C

    Really... lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovely

    Hmmmm...... interesting but in a good way

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Chris,

    I love the uniqueness of this piece, inspiring.
    The reoccuring phrase is fantastic and the ending is satisfyingly sad!

    Well done!

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Heer

    Awwwww !! very nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    WOW thats a tongue twister! i love it!!!

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