Comments : Last Goodbye xo

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Hate to say this...
    But its not as strong as your others...
    To me anyway...
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Wow i really liked this. It had a ot of emotions and the flow was great. This must have hurt to write. =/

    So I guess we'll walk away,
    Leave eachother behind,
    We both know there's so much to say,
    But maybe it's better left unsaid this time.

    ^^^This is my favorite stanza. I really enjoyed it. I know exactly how u feel. this has happened to me before. I'm sorry u had to go thru it. once again beautiful job. 5/5
    ~Forever broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    I liked it. I particularly like the last stanza. Although, I have to say, I agree with sexyCheckers. It isn't as strong as some of your other work, but it's good all the same.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    EXACTLY how I'm feeling. Great poem love your work!

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I really liked your poem.The first two lines had me captivated .."you had me at hello, but you had to say goodbye" great opening! Looking 4ward to reading more of yours. LOL

  • 15 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Beautiful good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Kelsie Danielle

    Good poem ur really good

  • 15 years ago

    by NaeNaeConspiracy

    This is amazing! the emotion here is killer, I know exactly how it all feels.
    5/5