by katie Apr 30, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Silently she sleep's, |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats eraly good, i like the ending bit great work xxxx |
Theres seems to be a lot more to this poem, so much below the surface, what you have written hasn't over powered it or left me with nothing else to consider. The poem has made me curious and made me think about the many things that could be at play. Very beautiful, simply written, good work again :) |