Woah. this was really good. If this is true I'm so sorry. You have a lot of talent as a poet tho. I loved the emotions you poured into this. It's like you opened up your soul and let the words just flow. Way to go. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Wow. Thats intense, pure emotion showing through. Excellent expression. Well laid out and has a steady rythym. Good work.

Aww thats so powerful. wow, great job deep topic xxxx