Again, you have some spelling mistakes, and this needs proper punctuation. People look down upon writings that do not have proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

"You loved me clean then turned around being mean"

^^Since not all lyrics/poetry has to rhyme, you should really take out the "being mean" part. It sounds like something a 3 year old would say.

I see that these are song lyrics, all in all, not too bad. I could headbang to this, and even dedicate it to someone!
4/5
~Lace

Another good edit. Sounds much better.
=)

I wonder what this is about....