That's It

by Suicidal Love   Apr 30, 2008


With your arms round my waste
Your eyes deep in mine
You said that you loved me
It started out just fine

It was all good for a while
I fell for your spell
You said that you loved me
It was going quite well

We used to dance all night
You used to make me smile
I doubted that you loved me
But I believed you for a while

You lied and cheated way too much
You treated me like s***
I knew you couldn't love me
Id had enough, thats it

I couldn't take it anymore
You'd pushed it one too far
You lied, you said you loved me
then drowned your sorrows at the bar

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    I like this one...nice job..and i kan relate...:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tyler Durden

    Damn, I felt that. =\ I get the feeling that someone knows me alil too well :S

    The emotion behind it is outstanding. The last stanza reminds me of me alil bit, quite shockingly.
    the first and second stanza reminds me of my love.

    I wish you would add a stanza, where you make up, because I could totally relate. Is it possible to change the way you feel about someone? Doubt it.
    But you pulled it off here. It goes to show, that one can only put up with so much.

    Amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    Another one that hits me emotionly....Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    That was a really great poem, i know how you feel, because that has happened to me, and i still love him and i don't know what to do. sometimes i feel so lost. well i hope everything works out for you. keep upp the good work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww..this was really sad...umm sometimes i felt like it ended abruptly in each stanza, but....

    good job, it was really nice to read.
    Aly