Wow I really like this piece. It was worded wonderfully. The flow was interesting and kept me reading.
Do you still love me like I love you?
Was I stupid to think this love was true?
I'm sorry if you think our love has past
But believe me when I say, this love will last
^^^This is my favorite stanza. I really loved it, it spoke volumes to me. Your very talented. keep it up. 5/5
~Forever Broken~