by Deana Apr 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Whisper my name upon a kiss |
by MARI
Awawa this is a really great poem good job!!! |
by Sourav
The description is so beautiful and gorgeous! The imagery is perfect. A pleasure to read! |
by Kaetaj
The rythm was wonderful and it was nice; keep it up! |
by H E Losey
A very well construted write, though it threw me upon first reading. Once realized I enjoyed your rhyme scheme and the mental images portrayed were gripping. |
Very beatiful poem full of emotion loved it 5/5! |