by Nobodys Hero Apr 30, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Ice shards snaking through her veins |
by Riley
I've read a few of your pieces and you're an amazing writer i'll say hah. I love this poem a lot and the others just as well (: |
I like how you express your self in all kinds of way you are doing a good job hope you keep it up and do some more poems about life |
Not quite as powerful as your other pieces I've read, but still a wonderful piece. Your wording astounds me. I love it, as well as the way they are stuctured. Brilliant! |
by Paiger
Wow, this is really well written. I'm not a big fan of dark poetry but from what I've read this is really good. You're very descriptive, but you also leave plenty to the imagination, not completely spelling it out. Great job |
by Cheyanne
Wow this poem is beautiful...it flows so nicely...and it's so different from what im used of reading....you did an amazing job!!!...very unique<3...5/5 for sure:) |