Wow, this is a strong poem, i really liked it. it has alot of pain and loss in it. great job in writting it. im adding it to my favorites.

Ic an tell the time and effort that went into writing this. wel done it is a good poem. keep writing xxxx

Wow it was like I could just picture the whole thing just by how you wrote it!!! Very well done!!!!!!!

Very sad and heartfelt poem.
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Well just the one poem, but its long and good. comment bk :)

Wow really great poem i love it so much !
Keep writting-

Lovely piece x

Intense, i love intense poems! great job

What an exceedingly sad write,it came across like a bit of a vent like you had to get it off your chest.
Well written

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