My Time

by xxKelsey   May 1, 2008


I grab the razor
Its time again
I put it to my wrist
My heart sinks
I push down
My arm goes numb
The flesh rips
My veins go cold
My blood drips
I fall to the floor
My carpet drenched
My eyes water
This is it
This is my time

-Writen by Dylan Walker

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Aww that was sad, but so vivid. good job. keep it up Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by HuRtInG bEcAuSe Of YoU

    Great emotion in it. Well done
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Wow. this was short but so powerful. such strong emotion. i loved it.

    --aprils conspiracy

  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    Oh wow... I feel pain when I read this. It is very good! I don't really know much about poetry so I can't give you a comment like "the words worked in time with the whatever"... but I can say that this is a great poem. It's not often that I can read something and actually feel the emotion so strong. Very well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow!! so deep and so much emotions.. Wow!!! Amazing job.. Please take care.

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