The Way Out

by xxKelsey   May 1, 2008


My life's a blur, foggy and unclear
But i can still feel
I feel the blade against my skin
The blood dripping down my arm
This life isn't right
I want out
Why cant i quit
So easy, so quick
With one swift motion
It could be over
My pain gone
My suffering ended
This is my only way out
I want out

-Writen by Dylan Walker

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  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    Deep.. Very understandable emotions. I like it

  • 16 years ago

    by HuRtInG bEcAuSe Of YoU

    I have had those same feelings. Very nicely put.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    This is sad .. I could feel ur pain and ur emotions in this.. and i hope thatz not the only way.. I Love it how u riten it. another Awesome job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by fallenforever

    Wow a sad and meaningful poem you've done a great job keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by She Is My Rain

    I really liked this one..it's got emotion and meaning. good job :]

    ~XXxLostWithoutYouXxx

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