My mind is rotting!

by BrieAnna   May 1, 2008


You will die
the voice whispers
into my ear
The voice is my mind
explains why it sounds so clear

plenty of sicknesses
appear in this life
you could catch one
Perhaps you'll have to go under the knife?

fevers, or just strep throat?
They are all just the same
Things that haunt me night and day
and make me insane

I am so sick, with the fright of being sick
so caught up with the fever of being feverish
Somtimes I just need to let go,
Just go with the flow and...

STOP
Hold on a minute,
Take control

Do I really think I'm dying?
Why does my mind deceive me?
I can't really be dying
how can this be?

My mind is insane!
Its all in my head
These are the words
that my parents have said

yet help is nowhere
Nowhere to be spotted
I can't just wait here
Until my minds rotted

I said help!
I said please!
I'm so sick
Of this stupid disease

**This poem refers to my O.C.D.**

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  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    My sister has OCD so i know what its like it must be very hard for you too...I enjoyed this poem good job :] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Fast poem , !! mmm, i kind i like the way , yuo put STOP , in middle and then at last you hail for help !!

    the feelings , are just let me inside, i like it even ti si short words, and rapid !!
    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well written... i could feel the emotions within...
    I felt the rhythem in the first few stanza little off.. otherwise its a good one..

    "I am so sick, with the fright of being sick
    so caught up with the fever of being feverish
    Somtimes I just need to let go,
    Just go with the flow and..."

    ^^I liked this stanza...

    STOP
    Hold on a minute,
    Take control

    this part is my fav...it adds more effect to the poem..

    except the rythem in few stanza its nicely written...

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    I didn't know it was about OCD until the end.. But all in all it was really good. The wording was good and the flow was kind of off to me.. Other than that it's great. Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    Yea i didnt really get it was about ocd untill the end, but i reall liked this...and your rhyming was superb..lol i was almost singing the words cuz it had that good of flow =]
    5/5

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