This is the first poem I have read on O.C.D. you did such a great job you should consider writing a book on the subject

Yea i didnt really get it was about ocd untill the end, but i reall liked this...and your rhyming was superb..lol i was almost singing the words cuz it had that good of flow =]
5/5

I didn't know it was about OCD until the end.. But all in all it was really good. The wording was good and the flow was kind of off to me.. Other than that it's great. Nice job.

Well written... i could feel the emotions within...
I felt the rhythem in the first few stanza little off.. otherwise its a good one..

"I am so sick, with the fright of being sick
so caught up with the fever of being feverish
Somtimes I just need to let go,
Just go with the flow and..."

^^I liked this stanza...

STOP
Hold on a minute,
Take control

this part is my fav...it adds more effect to the poem..

except the rythem in few stanza its nicely written...

Fast poem , !! mmm, i kind i like the way , yuo put STOP , in middle and then at last you hail for help !!

the feelings , are just let me inside, i like it even ti si short words, and rapid !!
:)

My sister has OCD so i know what its like it must be very hard for you too...I enjoyed this poem good job :] 5/5