by Katie May 1, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
As she stares out the window, |
by Katie
Thanks to everyone by the way for commenting |
by Katie
It's not about how i was feeling but i was kind of depressed one night and i just needed a way of getting my feelings out and writing helps that a lot |
by Baby Rainbow
Excellent opening line, good flow and stong ending. great job xxx |
by Ingrid
The poem had a really good flow to it and the wording was great also. |
by Lacie
I love it, thanks for posting it it was an honor to read |