My dear sister in heaven, i don't think i can make it

by she   May 1, 2008


I'm sorry sis I know you're waiting up there for me,
But I don't think I can make it,
My love,
This should come as no surprise,
For you have watched me from above,
As I have slowly wrecked my life.
But tell God I love him,
Just as much as you,
That much you better know is true.
I know our final parting will hurt,
Even more than our first,
But sis,
Save yourself
Stop hopping, stop wishing I will make it
because I'm telling you now, plain and simple
I never will
My lovely sis,
God, this hurts,
I know you feel it too
Goodbye,
This is Our unexpected twist
our final parting
I love you forever,
Through time, realms, and space
and I will FOREVER remember your beautiful yet distant face

[love her so much]

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  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Thats seruusly depressing and you should never quit on yourself-always live for life..it's really rather amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Another sad but brilliant poem, it must of been so hard for you to write this, just remember wherever you are she will always be watching over you....so so sorry for your loss, i hopw the pain one day heals.....I wrote a poem you might find comforting, its called dry your eyes.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    1st of all i absolutly love this.
    it was very sad..made me think about me and my sister and how it would be.. i know it probaly would be just like that for me if she died.
    Great job on this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by myblackfairytale

    I can realate to this so much as i lost a brother but this poem was amazing.. I cnt bleieve the emotion.. you have som uch talent.. PM me if you need to talk xo

  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    That one made me cry. im sooo sorry honey!! i wish i could help ease the pain that you own. just remember you have to make your own destiney (sp). xoxoxo

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