Hidden truths, broken promises

by dante   May 1, 2008


I give you a gift
It is all i have to give
My gift to you? my broken heart
The love i cannot live
The sorrowful surrender of my body mind and soul
For though you will not feel the same
With this gift i am whole
A gifting with no need of knowlage
Only empathy
For please understand my angel
That you've just been given me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I thought the premise of the poem was good, but your flow was a little off and you have some spelling mistakes. It was a nice read though, I think you could expand on it a little more.

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