ABOUT LOVE...by saffy

by safwanah   May 1, 2008


Love can be sweet,
but it also can be bitter,
love is wonderful when u fell in love,
but it also can be painful when the person u love hurt u.

i tried to forget what happened last night,
but i cant cause it still in my mind,
i thought i can forget u but its too hard,
i give u all my heart but,
u destroy it,
u give me thorns that contain poison.

i try to forget and erase,but
i get reminded of that u more,
u make me useless,
all my love is pure,
but u make me like this.

u didn't appreciate my love,
now u didn't know how i feel,
but one day u know it,
its really painful until i cant felt my soul,
i cant touch u cause u already gone without say last farewell.

breaking up is fast,but forgetting is hard
the love is painful,and i am hurt alone,
i try to hate u but my heart felt suffer,
I'm sick of this... i hate u more.. i hate u lie to me.
if u love me why u lie me?
why did u left me?
i love u with all my life,but u forget me now like a heartless person
i should loved u but now you like forgetting me.

with all my life,the person i love,
he only gave me tears and left
the tough love which i was hurt alone,
should i deserve this punishment?
u punish me so hard is this my sin to love u?
thanks for everything.. until u make me like this,
i will not forget the way u lie to me...until i die
i give love sincere but i knew it there was lie on u..
now.. goodbye.. this is about my love how about u?..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm i would say poor one , dear, not in term of feelings ion that you did great !! that is the important , but remmber you are writing a poem , and poems , msut have a rhym and you must have constat number of lines in each paragraph

    :)

    hope you refine it i know that will little work from youit can be done perfectly

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