Comments : Friends Apart

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I can feel your pain as i went through the same thing but i overcome it now and you hope you will too.

    i would go for true friends rather than best friends; true friends tell you "what is right" while best friends tell you "you are right".

    true friends those who care about each other, respect each other, understand each other and LOVE each other.

    good luck

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its great heba ,but sad,i know this feeling ,i wish if you okay now ,i like how you write it and my favoraite part:
    I thought that we would never be apart.
    I thought that the end of our friendship would never start.

    I thought that we would be friends forever.
    I thought we would never be scattered ever!

    its great ,keep in good work well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow it is really good one
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaitlyn Gilbertson

    Hey Hey... haha. SO i like this poem, its emotions were laid out on the table, i dont think there were any secrets left... Also The sentences seem to begin with repetitive words like "We" and "I" etc.
    But still. its a good poem.
    Great work,
    -kait.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Awwww, let me kill her, tell me who it is

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Thank you all for your comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Heer

    Very nice :]

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Truly lovely ! We r nothing without some1 beside us ... Good job Heba

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    "Best friends, we were apart , and you were killing me slowly."
    This is so painful bcoz If enemies harm u...By the end u r sure that they hate u but the real stab and the real hurt bcome harder if they are from ur friends...

    P.S
    We had a relationship that would never ends.
    Ends shouldn't be with "S"..
    Good job darling...