Comments : What a Mother should be

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This was sweet. It made me want to write something for my mother.
    Every line in this was true, and I loved it.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A good piece, well, I liked it anyway. I'm not crazy about the three line stanzas, but hey, poetry's about exploration, so I'm happy to get on board with it.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    A quait read, I think. A nice gesture. The title threw me off a bit; I was expecting something more personal. You see, alot of us have mothers that ought to be something else, if that makes sense. Nonetheless, its a sweet one and a nice add to your collection.