I don't mean to be selfish
But this pain is all about me
And so is this hole I am in
But soon I know I will be free.
^^^^that was my fav bit!!
loved this poem it was full of emotion well done!!
xo

I like it...nicely done.
Very pictural and emotional. =)

Come on , don't be bleak, ofcourse the whole world needs you and we really care about you, so smile for life and stop wishing death, don't worry everything is gonna be okay, just be happy and if you need any help we are ready to give to you because you really worth it.

a beautiful poem

Tears of relief will fall
When I take my final breath
Then the pain will leave my heart
As I meet my long awaited death.

my fav part. i can relate to this poem SO MUCHHHHh i wanna die ;((((((
5/5