This is so touching.. Good job! :')

Very sweet poem...some parts are very hearfelt.. you made me miss my teddy bear... :) I like your choice of words...

well written..

Very good story flow with a topic to which many can relate. Your use of whose in the next to last stanza should be "who's" if you meant "who is". I am not sure of your rythm being consistent throughout.

Hey heaps good adam ... i love teddy bears so i completely feel for u and patrick murphy can get off his ass and stop picking on people ... u no every insult he makes says something about flow ... well your "constructive criticism" has no effing flow u sound like a d i c k h e a d and i hate you :)

I need to go find Burpy now.....

It made me miss being a little kid. Then I didn't get weird looks for confiding in a doll. = ]