Comments : Sun and Rain

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like this one, one of your best xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    So much happened. So many thoughts. I hope this was not true. Still, I'm glad you put it in words for yourself, and to let us share in your healing. You are a talent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A sad story. There are times I believe everyone has where just when you think things can't get any worse, they do. Also times where everything seems to be going great and something aweful happens. And so is the circle of life. This poem is an excellent example of how short life can be. It can be taken at any moment without warning. We should cherish each day and try to make the best of it. Nice job on the poem.