Waw,its realy nice the discription in every line lend me to the other,powerfull words and nice flow,but i like more the feeling and the story,you did a great jop and less i can give you is 5/5,well done

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
are u shure ur only 15??? this has got to be one of the best poems ive read so far. u may be 15 but your writing style is that of a 30 year old =]

10/5(not a typo)

Hey.. this is nicely written.. very long for me but still it was a good read...

"Cinderella skip your ball,
stay home and cure disease,
gaze at the stars,
with wonder and awe,
appreciate the stories,
your father read to you,
live to learn,
create your fairytale dream,
and my dear girl,"

^^ I liked these lines the most... i could feel some kind of encouragement reflected by these lines..

the description is great...

great write..

Woah ... adam ... that was freakin awesome ... i think i read it at school but i like it better on here ... hehe

Oh and patrick murphy is a (insert your choice of profanity here) :)

This is my favourite poem of yours so far. = ]

Is pretty, and sadly true. Which makes it prettier.

I love this poem. I really do. It's beautiful and I learned from it. Great job!