Where one story ends the other begins, when one night passes.. comes a new dawn n with a new dawn a new flower n with a new flower a new smile beneath a new blue skies cloud, where new leaves n birds sing of joy..... n along comes a new hope....

Good poem..

Keep writing,

best wishes,

karan

Very powerful piece. It really opens your eyes to the world that has blinded ppl like us today.

Through heartache and sorrow,
tears welled up in eyes unseen,
what lies ahead - be there a tomorrow?
Only ever there to fulfill one's selfish dream.

^^^This was a very mysterios stanza. It was powerful and kept me wanting more. I liked it a lot. Great choice of words. 5/5
Kaity

Very powerful piece. It really opens your eyes to the world that has blinded ppl like us today.

Through heartache and sorrow,
tears welled up in eyes unseen,
what lies ahead - be there a tomorrow?
Only ever there to fulfill one's selfish dream.

^^^This was a very mysterios stanza. It was powerful and kept me wanting more. I liked it a lot. Great choice of words. 5/5
Kaity

Powerful indeed. your choice of wording is wonderful. i read this, and instantly thought about the powers of the world. presidents, prime ministers, kings and queens, and religious persons. society wants us to believe we shall follow them without doubt or fear.....perhaps it is us, that are the masked ones.
wonderful piece

salwa