Beautiful You

I wrote this 10 years ago for a girl I felt I wouldn't be able to live without. We broke up in April of this year (2018) which was shortly after the ten year anniversary of this poem. There is a sad irony in this. I haven't written poetry ever since the last post I made here. I feel a deep sadness when I read this now. A reminder of what once was.

Woooooooooooow...it's sooo beautiful
I really enjoyed reading it..
I can just say woooooow to it..
keep up the great work!!

5/5 of course!!

"You are to me like air to the lungs,
without you I'd die gasping for your beauty
As repetitive as the waves touch the shore
you shall be on my mind forever more"

This was my favorite sanza I loved it so much.
this poem is very sweet you can feel the love in the words. it reminds me of the person i love you are a very good poet

You are such an amazing writer. just the way you word things brings images and so great an emotion. the poems are shown to be straight from your heart. i love the style in which you write and i hope to see much more from you :) 5/5 greattttt job! god bless

Beautiful you is beautiful poem.. it has beautiful words, strong emotion, nice flow. First stanza is beautiful, 2nd is also beautiful, 3rd is more beautiful, and 4th is the most beautiful, I like the way you describe your ideas..
As if you could make it longer, it would be more beautiful.
beautiful you was beautifully written.. :]