Do over

by keithnwv   May 1, 2008


I want so badly to write
but don't have the words to say
my mind, it seems like a blur
with thoughts I'm having today

why do i feel so alone
i know there are people who care
they wonder while i don't smile
these days thats something so rare

sometimes i just want to quit
why should i even try
I've allowed peoples lies at change me
from that happy and fun loving guy

i wish i could go back in time
and start things all over again
but I'd probably still do the same
and want you to be my best friend

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This was very nice, to bad we can't start over. Wonder if we would really change anything haha

    I enjoyed this very much.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Don't be sad, you've got us now.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    It is very touchy. I understand why most of the people can relate to this. Very well written. Liked it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaitlyn Gilbertson

    I relate to this alot too, it seems like everything fell apart. Amazing thoughts even though they are thoughts that alot of people have, in their own simplistic sense, you pulled them together nicely.

    Good Job =]

    - Kaitlyn

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    I can relate to this one ,at times I wish I could start over....but in honesty I don't think I would do things very much differently to what I have done.An excellent write!!

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