Loving this. it is just full of loving emotion. i think you are a great writer =)

A very personal heartfelt poem is such a joy to read about this very special event
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Wow oh wow...
loving the Poem ..its like the bomb...
hahaha ..
but really very nice ...

A sweet dedication to your mother. As far as poetry goes though, the rhyme is forced. Maybe with practice, you will get better at this. Nice sentiment.