Insane Asylum

Chose good words, each was very emotional.
also i liked the name, it caught my eye.
the style was very unique
this deserves a 5/5
very good job

I love it. good work. excellent word usage, and i love the simplicity. it's really easy to understand. keep it up.

Your choice of words is truly powerful. The fact that you managed to say so much within such short piece impressed me. I like the title, it is eye-catching and it got me interested to read this piece. The rhythm that you created is effective and whole poem is original, different from anything I've read before.

I like this writing style and I think that it's quite difficult yet you pulled it off excellently.

Overall, fantastic dark poem, simple yet truly remarkable.

5/5

Oh this is for that contest! I've read a few of the poems for this contest, and I like yours the best.
Man, the way this flowed, how every word just rolled off my tongue *goes and reads again* *and again* IT'S AMAZING for the type of poem it is!
5/5
If it was my contest, you'd win!
~Lace [cheesy gangsta]

(Comment free-of-charge due to the shortness XD)