by eehcuhhhz
The sherbert. |
by michelle
I love it! well done! it's really descriptive and it flows beautifully! |
You have painted with words a heavenly picture of natural beautity that moves the spirit. You are a great poet |
by Lisa
That was absolutely inspired |
by NinjaGirl
Another magnificent nature write from you! a brilliant rhyme and flow, once more. wonderfully written as well. |
by expressivechild
This is a beautiful one. I really like your use of language in this. Btw, thanks for correcting me on my spelling and grammatical errors. I wrote that poem a long time ago yet I didn't notice the mistake I made! Haha.. :p |
I'm not a fan of the opening, it made the reader feel as though they were only reading the poem, though had you such beautiful descriptions of nature, it felt as though being told about it rather than seeing it if you get what I mean. |