An angel set free (suicide, found on 3rd day)

by Bleed-Like-Me   May 26, 2004




A tragic story
Will soon take its tole
You will see the art of her life
In each little unfold

Her secret disguise
Her one special friend
He told her to live life
Till life wants to end

Her smile, such a fake
Her quietness when she wakes
Every single move hurts
In every single minute of a day
Is when she wants to be alert

Her smile fading
No longer fake
Her happiness fading
She doesnt want to awake

Everyday a diary entry
Tells the pages how shes unlucky

Blood stained pages
Poems and the such
Her pain and sorrow written down
She cant take this much

Jealousy with every vision
Her hurt spread
Her black and white imagination

If only you knew why she cried
And if only you knew every second she wished to die
Maybe you would realize
Shes not alright
Shes ill
Not taking her pills

Suicide attempts from A-Z
Shes tried things you wouldnt even imagion

A fragile soul
Wrapped in the hands of fate
Her little heart
Closing up, giving her hate

She closes her eyes
Its all written here
Shes thinking what she dare

Hour later
Shes dead hanging above the floor
Now lets go back and tell some more

Knife in her hand she slits a slash
Her wrist so red
One big gash

The pills in her mouth
Sleeping ones at that
Her innocence lost
In this big trap

A rope hanging tall
With her neck through the loop
She ended it all
Becoming mute

Her world so dark
Coaded blue
Her anger within
The hate for the card she drew

Nobody knows
Where she has gone to
Nobody knows she is away
Her tears dried up, her head wet from rain

The first day they looked
But could not find
The girl they thought had a beautiful mind

The second day
The police could not figure out
Where this girl is, so divine

The third day, they find
A secret lock
They open it up, and find a clock
The clock is ticking faster and faster
But slowing down in every block

The girl hangs dead above the wooden floor
Of the secret house
Up in a tree
Hanging from the branch
That was in middle of thee

The police shocked to see
The little girl
ANd carved on her wrist said,
"Im an Angel set free"

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  • 20 years ago

    by amz

    hiya! wow!!! that poem is mint! its propa sad but i jst love it! well done! keep it up!! luv ya amy xxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Bleed-Like-Me

    i write from experiance...thanks all

  • 20 years ago

    by kaysha

    wow... another great masterpiece :o) just wondering-do you write from "attempts" or experiences? Or just writing what you think/feel? Well im just curious because i also think abotu suicide and cut. Ive tried pills and such... well hope everything is doing better . mahalo

  • 20 years ago

    by Bleed-Like-Me

    who do u think? i said "he", it was u

  • 20 years ago

    by Bleed-Like-Me

    ooooooo zach!! just slap um, i like that. ur sooo cute. I love you too, and always will. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxo thanks u!!!!!!!