Aww such a sad story poem.
heartbreaking
5/5

I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! great job. i am still pretty much an amature ,but...if you ever have time i would appreciate if you glanced at my poems and critique a bit!
Kelli

Wow, im not much for comments. but that left me even more at a loss for words

OMG I love this poem your a really great poet better then me thats for sure

Whoa. That was great! It really wasn't what I expected, it was way better! This is definetely going on my faves list!!!

Such good imagery. It painted a perfect picture though, the poem itself was very sad.
5/5

OMG i love this poem keep up the good work hun
5/5

I was impressed just by the first two stanzas alone, and the rest was just icing on the cake. I love the way this paints a picture for me.. I can imagine everything you say happening, and I feel the emotion that you scribe into your work. I really wish I could write as well as you (i have a huge ego, so well done lol)