Awww!!! <3<3
What an amazing poem! How can you not like your poetry! The only slight flaw is the flow - some places either have too many syllables or too little but that isn't important as the emotion feeling that comes through in this.
5/5
~FountainsOfBlood
[Aka - You're Number One Fan]

I love this poem so much it is just great

I love the lines "You are the beat within my heart
you are the blood beneath my skin"!!!!!!!!!! totally amazing!!!!

This was absolutly beautiful!!!!
i loved it!!!
"You are the beat within my heart
you are the blood beneath my skin
so many unforgettable memories
I don't know where to begin"

^^ i think that was my favorite!! it was really sweet!

"What will happen to us, I don't know
but I know my love is strong
and I hope you will finally see
that with me is where you belong"

^^ i thought that was really cute. i like how the first stanza and this were just almost alike, and it made anice effect.

great job!

5/5

Aly

I like this poem for it's theme and intensity. A well paced poem too. Nice one.

This poem is really good i like it :)

Wow i loved this so much it was really great. i loved the way it flowed so neatly together.((5))

~You are the beat within my heart
you are the blood beneath my skin
so many unforgettable memories~
I don't know where to begin
absolutly beautiful lines! so perfessional and just...beautiful!!!
such a beautiful poem. keep it up! 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

You're poems are really neat,i like them.

"you are the beat within my heart
you are the blood beneath my skin
so many unforgettable memories"

Luv that part just all in all a well written poem
great choice of words very thang great job..5/5

Awh this was really sweet.
a beautiful write indeed!

You are the beat within my heart
you are the blood beneath my skin
so many unforgettable memories
I don't know where to begin

i loved that stanza! it was lovelyy.
job well done.

-Ashlei.

Awww! this poem is really sweet. i can feel the emotion you put into it. beautifully written. keep it up. 5/5