by April May 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The sky has turned gray |
by Baby Rainbow
I liek this it speaks the truth. good work |
This is a good poem. It has some well thought-out lines, but it is too short to get much across. I like your word choice though, and your phrasing makes the poem easy to read and enjoy. Keep up the good work! |