Can you hear it scream?
cuz I know that I can
little voice in the back of my head
reminding me of every time I ran
-- like this part, yes i can hear it, buetiful poem

Well that was a great poem i really like it!^_^

I'm a big girl now
can't you see?
there's only one thing-
one thing that has control over me

= fave bit!!

love it hun well done keep writing xxx