This Angel

by Texastar   May 2, 2008


On the edge of heaven
if I fall of this cloud
would God forgive me in my suicide attempt?

Looking down, so far down
Wondering how much it would hurt for this Angel to fall to Hell

Judgment day came all to soon for this Angel trying to find right from wrong

Did God choose right when he sent this Angel up to heaven and not Hell?

How did this angel get sent to heaven, when she has done nothing to be sent here?

Wasn't the Devil once an angel like herself?

Couldn't she be casted to Hell just like he was?

The love of God, so powerful
The forgiveness of God, so much
God is so much and this Angel is so less
So why should He care if she falls to Hell?

These wings given to this Angel,
so white
so beautiful
so strong

Wait strong wings?

Can these wings carry this Angel to Hell?

tis just the Devil messing with my head
While he is in Hell and this Angel's in heaven

I will stand here and stare down to Hell
But never jump, fly, fall to Hell

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  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow very well written i loved reading it

    keep up the amazing work

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I can feel some hope inside ,
    nice work ,
    jsut work ont eh structure more ,
    add some good rhyming it would be prefect !!

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow the poem was amazing.
    Beautifully written
    keep it up
    5/5

    my favorite part was:

    The love of God, so powerful
    The forgiveness of God, so much
    God is so much and this Angel is so less
    So why should He care if she falls to Hell?