Comments : This Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow the poem was amazing.
    Beautifully written
    keep it up
    5/5

    my favorite part was:

    The love of God, so powerful
    The forgiveness of God, so much
    God is so much and this Angel is so less
    So why should He care if she falls to Hell?

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I can feel some hope inside ,
    nice work ,
    jsut work ont eh structure more ,
    add some good rhyming it would be prefect !!

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow very well written i loved reading it

    keep up the amazing work

    5/5